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Kumi and Keiju

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Long time no see right? :D

A pretty overdue Commission for :iconkomi-kitsune:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Aww...2 friends hanging out...it's adorable...time to criticize!

I feel like the ears are off and slightly disporportionate, especially Keiju's (the one on the left) but it's minor and barely noticable.

Also, (it might just be me) I never seen anyone have a pose where their right hand covers their left and vice versa when you're putting your arms around someone's neck, just a minor observation.

And...that's the most I can point out...other than the fact that the nametag wood board is not made with straight lines(it doesn't really matter). You've done really well with this sketch, keep on drawing and improving!